Post by Bloodstar on Aug 11, 2006 11:49:31 GMT -5
This is an example you guys can look at. It's long and descriptive...*nods* xD
Name of your Character: Bloodstar (Warrior name: Bloodheart)
Age: 20 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: NightClan
Position: Leader
Description: He is a strong black tom with red eyes, and the inside of his eyes (next to the red) is a brownish yellow hue. He has red tipped ears and a few red stripes around his tail that look like scars. He has two red paws; the left back one, and the right front one. He has two scars on his right thigh from a long ago fight with three rouges. He has a strong looking profile, but is very slender and thin.
Personality: He is loyal to his Clan and is fair to all of the NightClan cats. He loves kits and apprentices; he wants some kits of his own someday. He hates loners and rouges with a strong passion. If he himself finds a kittypet in NightClan territory he will either attack and laugh at it or question why it's there. He hates anybody who has betrayed NightClan. The ones he knows that have betrayed him, he will ban them forever from NightClan and send them to Fox Place, just so they learn their lesson. He is very crewel to ShadowClan and BloodClan cats.
History: As a kit he was shy, very forgiving, and hardly thought about anything, until he became an apprentice. His mentor taught him that if he forgave anything and everything, he would never be a good warrior. He would be forgiving the same cat over and over. He fought trying to be forgiving, but it was too hard. He tried to listen to his mentor on the advice, but couldn’t. Once he became Bloodheart, warrior of NightClan, he was attacked by the rouges that had killed his father. They had tried to do the same to him. It was then he realized it was hard to forgive the ones who have betrayed him. He is now the leader and is wise. He gives all his thanks to his old mentor.
Password: HAH! This is an example! Go and look in the rules to find it!
RPG example: Bloodstar stood at the entrance of the NightClan camp, smiling at all the cats walking from one end of the cave to the other. His dark eyes glanced around the cave and his tail swayed to and fro. He sighed and took a deep breath in, shaking his head. For a few heartbeats he thought, thought about everything before he became leader, before the last one died. How everything would be fine, how the past leader would smile and everything would be okay! He frowned with grief at the loss of NightClans past leader. He was now the leader; he had all of the responsibilities of the Clan.
He blinked his eyes many, many times before he shook away the sad thoughts. How would he be able to do everything, he was only deputy for a short time. 'This dead leader was now in SpiritClan with all of his ancestors.’ He thought for a few seconds more and shook his head. He had to do this, for the sake of SpiritClan and NightClan. He blew away his sadness and took the nerve to walk to the highest platform, just to announce who the new deputy would be. He jumped up onto the stone and took a deep breath, hoping NightClan would accept him as leader, hoping they wouldn't be afraid of him.
Name of your Character: Bloodstar (Warrior name: Bloodheart)
Age: 20 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: NightClan
Position: Leader
Description: He is a strong black tom with red eyes, and the inside of his eyes (next to the red) is a brownish yellow hue. He has red tipped ears and a few red stripes around his tail that look like scars. He has two red paws; the left back one, and the right front one. He has two scars on his right thigh from a long ago fight with three rouges. He has a strong looking profile, but is very slender and thin.
Personality: He is loyal to his Clan and is fair to all of the NightClan cats. He loves kits and apprentices; he wants some kits of his own someday. He hates loners and rouges with a strong passion. If he himself finds a kittypet in NightClan territory he will either attack and laugh at it or question why it's there. He hates anybody who has betrayed NightClan. The ones he knows that have betrayed him, he will ban them forever from NightClan and send them to Fox Place, just so they learn their lesson. He is very crewel to ShadowClan and BloodClan cats.
History: As a kit he was shy, very forgiving, and hardly thought about anything, until he became an apprentice. His mentor taught him that if he forgave anything and everything, he would never be a good warrior. He would be forgiving the same cat over and over. He fought trying to be forgiving, but it was too hard. He tried to listen to his mentor on the advice, but couldn’t. Once he became Bloodheart, warrior of NightClan, he was attacked by the rouges that had killed his father. They had tried to do the same to him. It was then he realized it was hard to forgive the ones who have betrayed him. He is now the leader and is wise. He gives all his thanks to his old mentor.
Password: HAH! This is an example! Go and look in the rules to find it!
RPG example: Bloodstar stood at the entrance of the NightClan camp, smiling at all the cats walking from one end of the cave to the other. His dark eyes glanced around the cave and his tail swayed to and fro. He sighed and took a deep breath in, shaking his head. For a few heartbeats he thought, thought about everything before he became leader, before the last one died. How everything would be fine, how the past leader would smile and everything would be okay! He frowned with grief at the loss of NightClans past leader. He was now the leader; he had all of the responsibilities of the Clan.
He blinked his eyes many, many times before he shook away the sad thoughts. How would he be able to do everything, he was only deputy for a short time. 'This dead leader was now in SpiritClan with all of his ancestors.’ He thought for a few seconds more and shook his head. He had to do this, for the sake of SpiritClan and NightClan. He blew away his sadness and took the nerve to walk to the highest platform, just to announce who the new deputy would be. He jumped up onto the stone and took a deep breath, hoping NightClan would accept him as leader, hoping they wouldn't be afraid of him.